I live in kerman .kerman is in the south of Iran. In my country you can see four seasons and long days with enough sunshine. And Ancient artifacts dating back to 3,000 BC, including the Daghianos city

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I live in kerman .kerman is in the south of Iran. In my country you can see four seasons and long days with enough sunshine. And Ancient artifacts dating back to 3,000 BC, including the Daghianos city and Konar Sandals hills will amaze you.also Shahdad region is near the city of Kerman, which is the hottest spot on earth, and at night it is very beautiful with a sky full of stars. People are very friendly with tourists and you can find many friends in a short time .🙂

2021년 1월 27일 오전 8:51

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I live in Kerman. Kerman is in the south of Iran. In my country you can see four seasons and long days with enough sunshine. The Ancient artifacts dating back to 3,000 BC, including the Daghianos city and Konar Sandals hills will amaze you. There's also Shahdad region that is near the city of Kerman, which is the hottest spot on earth, and at night it is very beautiful with a sky full of stars. People are very friendly with tourists and you can find many friends in a short time .🙂

Try to avoid repeating the same words such as "and" and "very". Instead you can say: "at night it is really beautiful".

2021년 1월 27일

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