On my opinion, a lot of people usually use Instagram and Telegram apps more than other in my country. Every day you can see that people in public transports in such as bus watching some funny videos o

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Ivan Durbala

On my opinion, a lot of people usually use Instagram and Telegram apps more than other in my country. Every day you can see that people in public transports in such as bus watching some funny videos or reading news in Instagram or Telegram. All my friends have been using Vkontake since 2016, but they prefer Telegram to chat right now. Naturally we have many other good apps but these two apps the most popular in Google Play and App store in my country, at least I see this statics in my phone :D

2021년 12월 2일 오전 8:34

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In my opinion, most people use Instagram and Telegram in my country. Every day, you can see people on public transport, such as on the bus, watching funny videos or reading news on Instagram or Telegram. All my friends have been using VKontakte since 2016, but they prefer using Telegram to chat these days. Of course, we have a lot of other good apps but these two apps are the most popular on Google Play and in the App Store. At least these are the statistics that I saw on my phone :D

Nice work, Ivan. I think that you write really well and you didn't make too many mistakes. Please have a look at my corrections and let me know if you have any questions. I'll be happy to answer them for you. All the best with your English learning! Kind regards, Joshua

2021년 12월 15일

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