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A few days ago, I celebrated my friend’s birthday. I had reserved a birthday plate at a cafe near the station. On the day, I went to the cafe with my friend, and while we were talking, a cake came out with music. On the plate, there were a cheesecake, a chocolate cake, and a donut, and it said “Happy Birthday.” My friend did not know anything about it, so she was really happy and surprised. I was glad too because she liked it and the surprise was a success. After that, we went to eat pasta. It was a set, so we could enjoy two different flavors. I got really full, but it was a great day that I will remember. I have gotten into shopping these days. When I go shopping, I find things I want, and it gives me motivation to work at my part-time job so I can buy them. Since my family will have a Christmas party soon, I went to buy presents for everyone. It was really fun to think about gifts that match each person, and I felt excited choosing them. I walked 13,000 steps and got tired, but I still want to go shopping again soon.
2025년 12월 2일 오전 12:08
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A few days ago, I celebrated my friend’s birthday. I had reserved a birthday plate at a cafe near the station. When the day came, I went to the cafe with my friend, and while we were talking, a cake came out with music. On the plate, there were a cheesecake, a chocolate cake, and a donut, and it said “Happy Birthday.” My friend did not know anything about it, so she was really happy and surprised. I was glad, too, because she liked it and the surprise was a success. After that, we went to eat pasta. It was a set, so we could enjoy two different flavors. I got really full, but it was a great day that I will remember. I have gotten into shopping these days. When I go shopping, I find things I want, and it gives me motivation to work at my part-time job so I can buy them. Since my family will have a Christmas party soon, I went out to buy presents for everyone. It was really fun to think about gifts that match each person, and I felt excited choosing them. I walked 13,000 steps and got tired, but I still want to go shopping again soon.
お疲れ様です!Nice work!
2025년 12월 2일
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