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Luis de la Cruz
Hi! Can you please tell me if there are any changes to make? I'm going for a casual conversational style. Many thanks!
• He's too stressed. It seems like he doesn't have time for anything besides work.
• He's too stressed. It seems like he doesn't have time for anything but work.
• He’s so stressed—looks like all he does is work and nothing else.
• Students know that the teachers do other things besides teaching.
• Students know that teachers do more than just teach.
• Students are aware that teachers have other responsibilities beyond teaching.
• He was a really curious kid and took a lot of courses outside of school too.
• This kid did a lot more than just homework and playing outside.
• This kid did a lot of different things besides just doing homework and playing outside.
• Many people don’t do anything else in their free time besides watching TV and scrolling through social media.
2025년 6월 6일 오전 10:18
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Hi,
Your sentences mostly work well for a casual, conversational tone. Here are a few light edits for flow and clarity:
1. He’s too stressed. Seems like he doesn’t have time for anything but work. (Slightly more casual without “It seems like”)
2. He’s so stressed — looks like all he does is work. (“And nothing else” is a bit redundant)
3. Students know that teachers do more than just teach. (This one’s perfect as is)
4. He was a really curious kid and took a lot of courses outside school too. (“Outside of” is fine, but “outside school” is more concise)
5. This kid did more than just homework and playing outside. (Cleaner and more natural)
6. Many people don’t do anything else in their free time except watch TV and scroll through social media. (Added “media” to complete the thought)
2025년 6월 6일 오후 7:55
These sentences are all fine and, in my opinion, would be quite suitable for casual conversation. 🙂
2025년 6월 6일 오전 11:49
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Luis de la Cruz
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