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It was windy in my location today. It's night but still windy with a lot of noise.

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It was windy here today. It's night but still windy with a lot of noise.
This is very good! The only improvement I have is just for it to sound more natural, most people would not say "in my location" but "here". You could also say "windy and noisy" if you prefer.

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