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I watched Me Before you' s movie it made me cried n felt romance it.I think this movie is the romance ever.I like while they were kissing but I don't like sad ending Correct me 🙏🙏

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I watched the movie Me Before You. It felt very romantic and made me cry. I think this movie is the most romantic movie ever. While I liked when they were kissing, I didn’t like the sad ending. Correct me 🙏🙏
Great job! You switched between tenses a few times which made it not flow as smoothly, but the ideas were expressed clearly! I changed some of the words around to make it sound more natural.
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I watched 'Me Before you'. The movie made me cry. I felt it's romance .I think this movie is the romaticest movie I've ever.l watched.I like while they were kissing but I didn't like it's sad ending. Correct me 🙏🙏

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