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This is my opening for the essay"write an essay about advantages and disadvantages of "the computers". Does it sound OK? In the 21st century, computers have become more popular in the world when more and more people are using them for many purposes, including entertainment. There are many ways to entertain ourselves on the computers like listening to music, watching a movie or especially playing games. In the last several years, computer games have had great development and become a crucial part of our lives. Not only do the computer games have benefits, but it also has some drawbacks. I will analyze them clearly and thoroughly.
2021년 2월 18일 오전 2:10
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If this is for IELTS it is too long. You only need two sentences. Reword the question. Give your opinion (if you need to.) If it is not for IELTS it depends how many words you are expected to write.
2021년 2월 18일
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