wendy
2022 is almost over, look back this especial year, there were a lot of special things happened.A big portion of the things were center around virus.Finally, I think we have defeated the Omicron.I am feeling well today, because I have recovered from the disease.But I am so busy, because I need to take care of my family who are suffering from the Omicron right now.So, I don't have enough time to learn English, but I will just do it and keep it up.
2022년 12월 21일 오전 9:40
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2022 is almost over. If I look back on/at these last twelve months, I see that lots of special things have happened. A big number of these events were center around the Covid virus. Finally, I think we have defeated the Omicron variant (in my country). I caught the virus but I am feeling well today. I am now recovering from the disease. And I am also very busy because I need to take care of my family. They also got Omicron and they are still ill. So, I don't have enough time to learn English, but I will just write this entry and try to keep it up.
I know it's difficult but try to keep in mind that the reader is not in your head. Be clear and separate the different stories in your writing: 1. 2022 and Covid in your country. 2. Your infection and recovery. 3. You looking after your family and not being able to study English. Best of luck to you and your family. Get you all well soon :) Oscar
2022년 12월 21일
2022 is almost over and when looking back at this special year, I realize that a lot of special things have happened. A lot of what happened was centered around the Coronavirus. I think we have finally defeated the Omicron variant. I am feeling well today, because I have recovered from the disease. But I am so busy, because now I need to take care of my family who has just caught the Omicron. So, I don't have enough time to learn English, but I will still try to do it and keep my learning routine up.
2022년 12월 21일
2022 is almost over and looking back on this special year, there were a lot of special things which happened. A big portion of the things were centered around the virus. Finally, I think we have defeated Omicron. I am feeling well today, because I have recovered from the disease. But I am so busy, because I need to take care of my family who are suffering from Omicron right now. So, I don't have enough time to learn English, but I will just try it anyway and keep it up.
I've tried to change as little of your text as possible. Not bad, keep it up.
2022년 12월 21일
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