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Commuting and its impact on our society.
Today's world is inconceivable without polluting transport. delve deeper, crucial to analyze the mean perks and drawbacks.
For one hand, using polluting transport in cities is an obvious risk to our health due to it causes lung diseases and reduce life expectancy. In particular, those individuals who live in the city center, where gridlock is very common. Furthermore, to commute using all kinds of transports lead people to sedentism.
Alternatively, people should choose healthier lifestyles to stay in shape, such as, commuting walking on foot more often and avoiding a sedentary lifestyle, and consequently, cuting down on pollution.
All in all, It is important to raise people's awareness through information campaigns. Parallely , the government should implement measures such as banning excessive cars parks in city centres or make public transport more affordable.
2022년 3월 15일 오후 8:50
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Commuting and its impact on our society. Today's world is inconceivable without
Pollution causing vehicles . delve deeper, crucial to analyze the mean perks and
drawbacks. On one hand, using polluting vehicles in cities is an obvious risk
to our health because it causes lung disease and reduce ps life expectancy. In
particular for those individuals who live in the city center, where gridlock is
very common. Furthermore, commuting using any kind of transportation leads people
to sedentism. Alternatively, people should choose healthier lifestyles to stay
in shape, such as, commuting walking on foot more often and avoiding a sedentary
lifestyle, and consequently, cutting down on pollution. All in all, It is
important to raise people's awareness through public awareness. Parallely ,
the government should implement measures such as banning excessive parking garages in
city centers or make public transportation more affordable.
This is good. In America we don’t say “transport” very often. It’s not wrong, it just sounds off to me. We DO use transportation.
I would say: you can get to the city with different types of transportation: car, bus train.
2022년 3월 15일
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