Today in the morning after I woke up, I had my breakfast with my parents then I drove to my work. However, my tasks in my office were a bit tiring, I had never observed such an exhausting day before.

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Today in the morning after I woke up, I had my breakfast with my parents then I drove to my work. However, my tasks in my office were a bit tiring, I had never observed such an exhausting day before. When I returned back to my house,I instantly relief all stresses I gained as I saw my little brothers enjoying playing soccer.

2020년 10월 23일 오후 10:57

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This morning after I woke up, I had breakfast with my parents. Then I drove to work. However, my tasks at work were a bit tiring. I’ve never had such an exhausting day before. When I returned to my house, I instantly felt relieved of all stress when I saw my little brothers having fun playing soccer.

2020년 10월 23일

This morning after I woke up, I had my breakfast with my parents. Then I drove to my work. However, my tasks in my office were a bit tiring. I had never experienced such an exhausting day before. When I returned back to my house, I was instantly relieved after all the stressed as I watched my little brothers enjoy playing soccer.

Remember to use periods.

2020년 10월 23일

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