Mariko
Last Thursday, I ate ramen after drinking with my ex-coworkers. I’m crazy about ramen, especially Tonkotsu ramen. It was the first time to visit that ramen restaurant. Fortunately, I chose the right one because some restaurants are sometimes not lived up to my expectations. I know it’s high calories, but I already miss it.
2020년 10월 26일 오후 2:40
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Last Thursday, I had ramen after having a drink with my ex-coworkers. I’m crazy about ramen, especially Tonkotsu ramen. It was the first time I have visited that ramen restaurant. Fortunately, I chose the right one, because sometimes restaurants have not lived up to my expectations. I know it’s high in calories, but I already miss it. Hi Mariko. Quite good. It isn't horribly wrong, but I made the changes to make it sound more natural. Keep practicing! Simón.
2020년 10월 26일
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