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I really enjoy pop, electronic and dance music. I love dancing and singing when I'm listening to music. It helps me a lot to wind down💃
2022년 5월 19일 오후 7:51
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I really enjoy pop, electronic and dance music. I love dancing and singing when I'm listening to music. It helps me wind down a lot.💃
It’s grammatically correct!
I also enjoy different kinds of music which make me so relaxed.
2022년 5월 20일
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I really enjoy pop, electronic and dance music. I love to dance and sing while
listening to music because It helps me wind down a lot. 💃
I thought the original post was fine honestly. I got the point. Happy dancing! 💃🏽🕺💃🏽
2022년 5월 19일
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