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Ignacio Blanco
I'm going to write about my plans for the next Easter. Usually, I don't like travel in the Easter because there is a lot of people traveling in this days and the price in the hotels is hi. This year I have plans for move around of Sevilla that is the city where I'm living. I have plans for to go a nearest town and to do a hiking rute like I did last Sunday. Last Sunday, I did a Route around the old mine called Aznalcoyar Mine, this is mine that caused a ecological disaster when the damp that contained water mine broken and sprayed the water in the river. Do you have plans for the next Easter? Do you have freedom of movement in you country or region? Best regard.

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I'm going to write about my plans for next Easter. Usually, I don't like to travel during Easter because there are a lot of people traveling on that day and the price from a hotel room is high. This year I have plans for travel around Sevilla, that is the city where I'm living. I have plans to go to the nearest town and to hike like I did last Sunday. Last Sunday, I hiked around an old mine called the Aznalcoyar Mine, this is a mine that caused an ecological disaster when its dam, which had contained water, broke and sprayed the water into the river. Do you have plans for the next Easter? Are you able to travel in you country or region? Best regards.
The second paragraph was a little hard to correct. However, please know that I understood what you were saying quite easily!

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