Olga
Hello everybody! I'm trying to describe my room. Can you check these my sentences? Can I write a such way? My room id my calmness. It's rather neither large nor small. There I resting, doing my homework, cleaning.The great advantage of my room is that it's cosy and spacious.
2024년 9월 29일 오후 7:55
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I can understand what you are trying to say, but it may sound a bit better if you word it like this “My room is my calmness (or where I feel most calm). It’s neither large nor small. it’s the place where I like to rest, do my homework, and clean in. A good thing (or something I love) about my room is that it is very cozy and spacious”
2024년 9월 29일
Here's some options on how to fix some issues and potentially improve it further. The first re-write has minimal changes, but plenty of options, just to fix the grammar, then give you some ideas on slight variations. The second re-write has more significant changes, to be closer to something I would feel comfortable saying, as an educated native speaker. My room is my calmness / my place of calmness / my place to relaxation. It's neither (too) large nor (too) small. There I rest, do my homework, tidy up / clean up / have a wash, etc. The great advantage of my room is that/how it's (so) cosy and (yet) (so) spacious. My bedroom is my sanctuary. It's where I feel calm. It's neither too large nor too small. It's where I rest, do my homework, have a wash, and so much more. What I most love about my room, is how it's so cosy and yet so roomy, so to speak.
2024년 9월 30일
Your description is almost clear, but there are a few adjustments for grammar and flow. Here's a revised version: "My room is my place of calm. It’s neither large nor small. I rest, do my homework, and clean there. The greatest advantage of my room is that it’s both cozy and spacious." This version improves clarity and smoothness while keeping your original meaning.
2024년 9월 30일
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