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I translated a part of Korean news into English. Would anyone mind correcting it?
The musical 'Almond(production : Live.com)' has released who were cast in 'Almond'.
The musical 'Almond' is based on the novel 'Almond (Original: Changbi 2017, author: Son Won-pyeong)', which has been published in 20 countries and sold over 900,000 copies in Korea, has been on the bestseller list since its publication in 2017.
The novel is the growing story of the hero Yoon-jae with
congenital disease called 'Alexithymia'. He has a grandmother and a mother as his family. They try to teach him emotions, however, all of a sudden they pass away by an accident.
The novel conveys how precious it is to understand others' emotions through conflict and reconciliation that Yoon-jae, who is left alone, experiences among people.
2022년 2월 17일 오전 3:33
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The cast of the musical 'Almond' has been announced by Live.com
Almond' is based on the novel 'Almond' (Original: Changbi 2017 by Son Won-pyeong), which has been published in 20 countries and sold over 900,000 copies in Korea since its official publication in 2017.
in the story Hero Yoon-jae suffers from a congenital illness called Alexithymia in the novel .His family consists of his grandmother and his mother.They were trying to teach him emotions, but suddenly they were killed in an accident.
The novel conveys how precious it is to understand others' emotions through conflict and reconciliation that Yoon-jae, who is left alone, experiences among people......Hi, I'm Kim. I'm Korean, but I live and was born in the U.S., so I'm a native English speaker.While you search for an English native speaker, I search for a Korean native speaker.We might be able to help each other. I followed you. Could you send me a text?
2022년 2월 18일
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The cast of the musical 'Almond(production: Live.com)' has been revealed.
The musical 'Almond' is based on the novel 'Almond (Original: Changbi 2017, author: Son Won-pyeong),' which has been on the bestseller list in Korea since its release in 2017. It has been published in 20 countries and sold over 900,000 copies.
The novel tells the narrative of Yoon-jae, a young man with a congenital condition termed 'Alexithymia.' His family consists of his grandma and mother. They attempt to teach him feelings, but they are tragically killed in an accident.
Through conflict and reconciliation that Yoon-jae, who is left alone, experiences among individuals, the story illustrates how vital it is to comprehend others' emotions.
I paraphrased this as best as I could. I hope it will be helpful. 🙏🏾
2022년 2월 17일
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