Julia
Hi.I’m Julia. My favorite movie it’s “Troy» with Brad Pitt. It’s the best movie I’ve ever seen. I like the plot.Brad Pitt is talented actor.How he played Achiles just without words. Very interesting film about courage,bravery and big love.
2021년 7월 6일 오후 6:10
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Hi.I’m Julia. My favorite movie it’s “Troy» with Brad Pitt. It’s the best movie I’ve ever seen. I like the plot.Brad Pitt is a talented actor. The way he played Achiles just left me speechless. A fascinating film about courage, bravery and true love!
Good job, Julia! I made a few corrections to make the text sound more natural in English. All the best
2021년 7월 6일
Hi.I’m Julia. My favorite movie is “Troy» with Brad Pitt. It’s the best movie I’ve ever seen. I like the plot. Brad Pitt is a talented actor. How he played Achiles just without words! A very interesting film about courage, bravery and big love.
2021년 7월 6일
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