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What is your motivation(s) to come to Nalanda as a volunteer?
I'm motivated by my eagerness for studying Buddhism and sharing some experiences of cooking and shopping. I think cooking and shopping wisely is very important because both my grandma and my father have diabetes and high blood pressure.
2025년 3월 26일 오전 9:36
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What is your motivation(s) to come to Nalanda as a volunteer?
I’m motivated by my eagerness to study Buddhism and share my experiences with cooking and mindful shopping. I believe that cooking and making wise shopping choices are essential, especially since both my grandma and my father have diabetes and high blood pressur
1. “My eagerness for studying Buddhism” → “my eagerness to study Buddhism”
• “Eagerness to study” is more natural than “eagerness for studying.”
2. “Sharing some experiences of cooking and shopping” → “share my experiences with cooking and mindful shopping”
• “Some experiences of” sounds awkward. “Share my experiences with” is smoother.
• “Mindful shopping” makes it clearer that you’re talking about making thoughtful choices.
3. “I think cooking and shopping wisely is very important” → “I believe that cooking and making wise shopping choices are essential”
• “I believe that” is a more formal and natural way to introduce this idea.
• “Making wise shopping choices” is clearer than “shopping wisely.”
• “Essential” sounds stronger than “very important.”
2025년 3월 27일 오전 4:47
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