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We know we have spent too much time on short videos,such as WeChat, Bilibili,but it’s just too hard for us to quit. Why do we do this?
Maybe because we’re built this way. In old times, focusing on the present helps us avoid dangers. And that incorporates into our brains as evolution. For now, there’re too many temptations that we just fall into them before we realize it. Also that, short videos may bring us fulfillment. Continuous stimulation just feeds our brains.
Pls help correct the sentences. Thank you!
2025년 6월 7일 오후 12:26
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We know we have spent too much time on short videos, such as WeChat, Bilibili, but
it’s just too hard for us to quit. Why do we do this? Maybe because we’re built
this way. In old times, focusing on the present helped us avoid dangers. And that
got ingrained into our brains as we evolved. Now, there’re just too many
temptations that we easily succumb to them before we realize it. Also, short
videos may bring us fulfillment. Continuous stimulation just feeds our brains.
Pls help correct the sentences. Thank you!
Succumb to temptation is another way to say : give in to temptation.
2025년 6월 8일 오전 2:26
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