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Samuel Rodrigues
Holidays that in my country:
1) Tiradentes - Inconfidência Mineira
It is a holiday in April 21th when we celebrate a social moviment that happened a few years before our independence.
A guy called "Tiradentes" (his real name was Joaquim) started a fight for civil rights such as rights equality, no submission to the colony, freedom to work and produce food in our land without any need to pay something to the colony, etc. The moviment happened in Minas Gerais and it went to other States like Bahia aftwards.
2) May 1th - worker's day
As the name says it is celebrated in May 1th of each year "worker's day" when most of them don't work. They can rest and stay with their families.
3) São Jorge
It's a religious holiday where catholic people celebrate São Jorge and his care with us. Normally, people go to the church and pray for protection and give thanks to São Jorge. In some places they gather with their friends and eat "Feijoada".
4) September 7th
In this date we celebrate a famous transformation in Brazil that happened in 1822 after years of fight (Proclamação da República). It was the year that Portuguese "lost" their hegemony over us and were no longer a colony.
5) In November we celebrate Black Conscientce and every year black peoplego to the center of Rio de Janeiro and stay next to Quilombo's Statue.
2021년 5월 6일 오후 12:12
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Holidays that in my country: 1) Tiradentes - Inconfidência Mineira It is a
holiday in April 21th when we celebrate a social moviment that happened a few
years before our independence. A guy called "Tiradentes" (his real name was
Joaquim) started a fight for civil rights such as rights equality, no submission
to the colony, freedom to work and produce food in our land without any need to
pay something to the colony, etc. The moviment happened in Minas Gerais and it
went to other States like Bahia aftwards. 2) May 1th - worker's day As the name
says it is celebrated in May 1th of each year "worker's day" when most of them
don't work. They can rest and stay with their families. 3) São Jorge It's a
religious holiday where catholic people celebrate São Jorge and how he takes care of us. Normally, people go to the church and pray for protection and give thanks to
São Jorge. In some places they gather with their friends and eat "Feijoada". 4)
September 7th In this date we celebrate a famous transformation in Brazil that
happened in 1822 after years of fight (Proclamação da República). It was the
year that Portuguese "lost" their hegemony over us and were no longer a colony.
5) In November we celebrate Black Conscientce and every year black peoplego to
the center of Rio de Janeiro and stay next to Quilombo's Statue.
2021년 5월 8일
Holidays in my country: 1) Tiradentes - Inconfidência Mineira It is a
holiday on April 21st when we celebrate a social movement which happened a few
years before our independence. A guy called "Tiradentes" (his real name was
Joaquim) started a fight for civil rights such as rights equality, no submission
to the colony, freedom to work and produce food in our land without any need to
pay something to the colony, etc. The movement happened in Minas Gerais and it
went to other States like Bahia afterwards. 2) May 1tlst - worker's day As the name
suggests it is celebrated on May 1st of each year "worker's day" when most people
don't work. They can rest and stay with their families. 3) São Jorge It's a
religious holiday where catholic people celebrate São Jorge and his care with
us. Normally people go to the church and pray for protection and give thanks to
São Jorge. In some places they gather with their friends and eat "Feijoada". 4)
September 7th On this date we celebrate a famous transformation in Brazil that
happened in 1822 after years of fighting (Proclamação da República). It was the
year that the Portuguese "lost" their hegemony over us and we were no longer a colony.
5) In November we celebrate Black Conscientce and every year black people go to
the center of Rio de Janeiro and stay next to Quilombo's Statue.
Well done! Not many changes 😊
A couple of notes:
1. "his care with us" does not make sense - what did you mean here?
2. Center is US English and Centre is British English so I have not corrected it.
2021년 5월 7일
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