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Hello ( please help me improve my writing skills with better expressions and sentences) . I am a 19 years old Senegalese girl. I graduated from high school last year and got accepted in an art and architecture preparatory program in France. I spent 10 months there. At first it was somewhat awkward because I had never been on my own in another country with a whole different culture but since French is my native language, it compensated the differences and I met a lot of great people. I had planned to pursue my studies in France for another 3 years ( in an interior design school ) however the pandemic sort of ruined my plans but the quarantine me realise that I would maybe learn more in a country with a foreign language such as English and meet even more different people...
2020년 10월 6일 오후 3:50
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Hello ( please help me improve my writing skills with better expressions and sentences) . I am a 19-year-old Senegalese girl. I graduated from high school last year and got accepted to an art and architecture preparatory program in France. I spent 10 months there. At first it was somewhat awkward because I had never been on my own in another country with a whole different culture but since French is my native language, it compensated the differences and I met a lot of great people. I had planned to pursue my studies in France for another 3 years ( in an interior design school ) however the pandemic sort of ruined my plans but the quarantine me realize that I would maybe learn more in a country with a foreign language such as English and meet even more different people...
Great writing! Sounds natural to me (as a native English speaker). If you want to learn some expressions/phrasal verbs with me sometime, or if you want to do writing editing sessions with me over video call, send me a message or check out my teacher profile and book a session with me :)
2021년 6월 1일
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