Kristina
It's an important part of my becoming conciseness. I used to be neglective to my life. But at the first year at the university I met a girl who interested with productivity and other familiar stuff. I had been inspided after her speech and I started googled this topic. I was a bit depressed person also. So when I faced with information that sport helps to be productive and happy, I immediately started to do. And it works! I started thinking clearly, more consciousness, I feel better, happier. Also I'm fit and look more attractive when I tried before diets after which I feel guilty. So I can say sport really changed my life!
2021년 10월 1일 오전 4:58
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It's an important part of my becoming conciseness (?). I used to neglect my health, but during the first year at the university, I met a girl who was interested in productivity and other familiar stuff. I had been inspired after her speech and I started by googling this topic. I also was a bit depressed, so when I was faced with the information that sport helps to be productive and happy, I immediately started to do so. And it works! I started thinking clearly, had more consciousness, and I feel better and happier. Also, I'm fit and look more attractive now than before when I tried diets after which I would feel guilty. So I can say sport really changed my life!
Good job! Not sure what you meant in the first sentence so I didn’t change it.
2021년 10월 1일
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