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Hello i am christine I live near vitré on britanny to france. I am fifty .i am nurse I would learning to english for go to differents trips .
2021년 10월 1일 오후 8:17
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Hello, I am Christine, I live near Vitré, in Brittany, France. I am fifty (years old). I am a nurse and I would like to learn English so I can go on different trips.
Hi Christine! In English, you don’t need to separate words and punctuation with a space! There’s a few corrections I made, et si tu veux je peux les expliquer en français aussi! Tu peux m’envoyer un message pour parler en anglais !
2021년 10월 1일
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Hello i am christine ,I live near vitré in brittany in france. I am fifty years old .i am a nurse and I would love to learn english to visit many places.
2021년 10월 1일
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Hello i am christine I live near vitré on britanny to france. I am fifty .i am nurse I would learning to english for go to differents trips .
Hello I am Christine, I live near Vitra on Britanny near France. I am fifty years old. I a nurse and I would like to learn English so I can go on different trips.
2021년 10월 1일
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