Vivi
I would like to talk about my Europe trip. I’ve traveled there with the travel agency about seven years ago. The most memorable thing is how knowledgeable the guide are. He can tell me many interesting stories about both stories related to the places where we go together, and the history of my country as well. He gave me a lot of new experiences and made a wonderful trip for me! Plus, I love the Vienna city which is in Austria. It has very beautiful scenery which makes me feel calm and relaxing. Can’t wait to go there again!💖 * Could you please comment about my writing and also my pronunciation (Is it hard to understand?🤣) thanks!
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2021년 10월 2일 오후 3:33
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I would like to talk about my Europe trip. I traveled there with a travel agency about seven years ago. The most memorable thing was how knowledgeable the guide was. He was able to tell me many interesting stories about both the stories related to the places where we went together, and the history of my country as well. He gave me a lot of new experiences and made a wonderful trip for me! Plus, I loved the city of Vienna which is in Austria. It has very beautiful scenery which makes me feel calm and relaxed. I can’t wait to go there again!💖 * Could you please comment about my writing and also my pronunciation (Is it hard to understand?🤣) thanks!
Be careful with tenses. When telling a story we often need to use the past tense. Your pronunciation is good. Keep practicing.
2021년 10월 2일
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