I like Arnold Schwarzenegger, I love his story, it motivates me to go for the things I want in life. I like his dicipline and the way he see life. He pushes me to go all the way.

Merle Arias

2021년 10월 4일 오전 2:10

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I like Arnold Schwarzenegger, I love his story, it motivates me to go for the things I want in life. I like his dicipline and the way he see life. He pushes me to go all the way.

Another style for you: Arnold Schwarzenegger is truly my idol. I am inspired by his stories to go for my dreams. His discipline also motivates me to go all the way in realising my dreams.

2021년 10월 4일

I like Arnold Schwarzenegger, I love his story, it motivates me to go for the things I want in life. I like his dicipline and the way he sees life. He pushes me to go all the way.

Wow, great job! I only changed one tiny thing - “see” to “sees”. This was pretty much perfect!

2021년 10월 4일

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