When im stressed i listen music and i look at the window of my room and i see generally birds and cows ( i live near a farm) and i also breath slowly! And i also think about the holidays and my family

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When im stressed i listen music and i look at the window of my room and i see generally birds and cows ( i live near a farm) and i also breath slowly! And i also think about the holidays and my family!! I have also anti stress balls of cute animals!Or i watch video asmr or of cook!

2024년 6월 23일 오후 4:00

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When im stressed, i listen to music, and i look at the window of my room, and i see generally birds and cows ( i live near a farm), and i also breathe slowly! And i also think about the holidays and my family!! I also have anti stress balls of cute animals!Or i watch a video asmr or of cook!

When you're using the letter, i by itself write it in capital even if nit after a period, and when you're using "and" after a sentence, put an (,) comma. Explanation " It calls the seven fanboy in English, including; for, and, but, or, and yet. I hope that help🙃🙂 I couldn't write more because I was in a rush

2024년 6월 23일

When I'm stressed I listen music and I look out the window of my room. I usually see birds and cows (I live near a farm) and I also breathe slowly. I also think about the holidays and my family. I also have anti stress balls of cute animals. Sometimes I watch asmr or cooking videos.

Capitalize the pronoun 'I'. If you look AT the window, that means you are looking at the glass, the frame, etc. In this case you're looking OUT the window, i.e. at what is on the other side. Exclamation marks !!! don't seem appropriate here. Save them for more dramatic or surprising things. ex. My house was on fire!

2024년 6월 24일

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