Hi everyone I admire to my father , he is so kind and patient, i know a lot of people complain to their father , they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my fa

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fahad aldossari

Hi everyone I admire to my father , he is so kind and patient, i know a lot of people complain to their father , they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father, he is also athletic and love football and support his team and he love it so much and like swimming and do exercises in morning.

2023년 1월 24일 오전 10:37

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Hi everyone . I admire my father, he is so kind and patient. I know a lot of people complain about their fathers, they are not patient and kind and are very strict, so I am so proud of my father. He is also athletic and loves football and support his team and he loves it so much, he also likes swimming and does exercises in the mornings.

2023년 1월 25일

Hi everyone I admire my father, he is so kind and patient, I know a lot of people complain to their father, they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father, he is also athletic and love football and support his team he loves it so much and like swimming and do exercises in the morning.

2023년 1월 25일

Hi everyone I admire my father, he is so kind and patient, I know a lot of people complain about their fathers, that they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father. He is also athletic and loves football and supports his team. He loves it so much. He also likes swimming and doing exercises in the morning.

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2023년 1월 24일

Hello everyone. I admire my father because he is so kind and patient. I know a lot of people complain to their father, they are not patient and kind and they have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father. He loves football and he supports his team, he loves it so much and he likes swimming, he is also athletic and he does different exercises in the morning.

2023년 1월 24일

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