Irene
In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other places are Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums, restaurants where you can eat typical Spanish meals, the city centre and what ever you want do do.
2022년 6월 7일 오후 9:32
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In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other beautiful places are Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums, restaurants where you can eat typical Spanish meals. There is also the city centre where you can do lots of things.
Hi Irene, great job! Well done. Spain sounds like a lovely place. Anyway, I'd be happy to help you improve your English. Please check out my profile and feel free to book a lesson :)
2022년 6월 9일
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In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my
opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other places are
Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums and restaurants where you can eat typical
Spanish meals. There is also the city centre where you can do whatever you want do do.
First paragraph is perfect. Last sentence is better when you split it.
2022년 6월 8일
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