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Kanon
Hello!
Today, I went to Tokyo Disney Sea with my high school friends. It was really fun! We could ride a lot of attractions because today is Wednesday! Thus, there is not crowed. Maybe, we ride about 15 attractions! I want to go there again.😊
2022년 6월 8일 오후 12:45
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Hello!
Today, I went to Tokyo Disney Sea with my high school friends. It was really fun! We could ride on a lot of the rides because today is Wednesday! Thus, it is/was not crowded. Maybe, we rode on about fifteen different rides! I want to go there again.😊
Sounds like fun! Well written.
2022년 6월 8일
1
Hello!
Today, I went to Tokyo Disney Sea with my high school friends. It was really fun! We could ride a lot of rides because today is Wednesday! Thus, it is not crowded. We rode about 15 rides! I want to go there again.😊
Wow! Looks Amazing. Hope you go there again soon.
2022년 6월 8일
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