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I ever traveled to Chengdu by myself where was a Chinese city.
At first,I was so excited to travel a strange place without parents or friends,which meaned freedom.
But after a few hours,I felt so bored.No one I can talk and share about my feelings.
So maybe travel alone is not fit me.
2022년 1월 6일 오전 5:47
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I have traveled to Chengdu by myself. At first, I was so
excited to travel a strange place without my parents or friends, which meant
freedom to me. But after a few hours, I felt so bored. There was no one to talk to or share
my feelings with. So maybe traveling alone does not suit me.
Good job!
2022년 1월 6일
I have traveled to Chengdu — a city in China — by myself. At first, I was so excited to to have the freedom to travel to an unfamiliar place without my parents or friends. But after a few hours, I felt so bored. There was no one to talk to and share my feelings with. So maybe I am not suited for travelling by myself.
Nice writing, just remember that after punctuation such as commas or periods ( , . ) you need a space before you start the next word.
2022년 1월 6일
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