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Today I watched the World Cup final. I also had a Korean test at school. I was very sleepy, but I did my best. This evening I have my part-time job. I want to go home early after work because I am tired. I hope tomorrow will be a relaxing day because I need some good rest.
2026년 7월 20일 오전 6:06
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Today, I watched the World Cup final. I also had a Korean test at school. I was very sleepy, but I did my best. This evening, I have my part-time job. I want to go home early after work because I’m tired. I hope tomorrow will be a relaxing day because I need some good rest.
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2026년 7월 20일 오전 9:48
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