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Today I will do my homework all day. But I will start at 1:00 p.m. Before I study, I will go to get a lash lift. Because there is a fireworks festival on Saturday, I want to be cute. Maybe I will meet my friend late at night and go to karaoke. It is my friend’s 20th birthday. I am very excited and I hope we have a great time.
2026년 7월 23일 오전 2:45
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Today, I’m going to do my homework all day, but I’ll start at 1:00 p.m. Before I study, I’m going to get a lash lift. Because there is a fireworks festival on Saturday, I want to look cute. Maybe I’ll meet my friend later tonight and go to karaoke. It’s my friend’s 20th birthday. I’m very excited, and I hope we have a great time.
Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, well organised, and easy to understand. You express your plans and feelings naturally, and your grammar is very accurate. The corrections were mainly about using more idiomatic expressions in everyday English. Excellent work! 😊
2026년 7월 23일 오후 12:38
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