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Hello everyone,
Today I want to talk about something I'm looking forward to.
It’s to listen to a new song released tomorrow by Kep1er, the K-pop idol I've been interested in recently. They debuted only this year.
I watched the audition program before their debut so I knew them, but I didn’t care for them so much because their debut song wasn’t my type. However, this time, everyone's visuals and concept are my type, so I can’t wait to listen to their new song.
By the way, my favorite member is Kim Dayeon😉
2022년 6월 18일 오후 11:02
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Hello everyone,
Today I want to talk about something I'm looking forward to.
It’s to listen to a new song released tomorrow by Kep1er, the K-pop idol I've been interested in recently. They debuted only this year.
I watched the audition program before their debut so I knew them, but I didn’t care for them so much because their debut song wasn’t my type. However, this time, everyone's visuals and concept are my type, so I can’t wait to listen to their new song.
By the way, my favorite member is Kim Dayeon😉
My biggest criticism is that I'd suggest adding some more details, right now it's a little vague. What kind of music do they play? What is the song called? what is your type of song? Aside from that, it's very good. Keep it up!
2022년 6월 19일
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