Muhammad
Actually i love languages, i want to learn English because English the most spoken language in the world, and i really enjoy listening to music in English and watching videos in English, i also like to learn Russian because of the challenges of this language , because Russian language is very different from other languages, i also love Persian language and would love to learn it very soon, because i love listening to Persian music,
2020년 10월 17일 오후 11:30
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I love languages, I want to learn English because English is the most spoken language in the world. I really enjoy listening to music in English and watching videos in English. I also like to learn Russian because of the challenges of the Russian language. The Russian language is challenging because it is very different from other languages. I also love the Persian language and would love to learn it very soon because I love listening to Persian music.
Great work besides adding periods instead of commas everything made sense. In English we have a term called run-on and it is when two or more sentences are mistakeningly put together. You can probably look on YouTube for work with not make run-on sentences. Other than that it was great.
2020년 10월 18일
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