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Clarissa
Hi everyone! My name is Clarissa and I live IN Rio de Janeiro. Iam sure as you know my city is named the marvelous city,but in my opinion just for the tourists. Unfortunately the city is abandoned by the government, there is no place you can fell safe at all. The financial crises affected directly the safety and healthy system. Hope we can all get trough this and wait for a better city.

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Hi everyone! My name is Clarissa and I live in Rio de Janeiro. I am sure that you know my city is named the marvelous city,but in my opinion this is just for the tourists. Unfortunately, the city is abandoned by the government, there is no place you can feel safe at all. The financial crisis has directly affected the safety and healthy system. I hope that we can all get through this and wait for a better city.
This is very well written. Keep going

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