JENNIE
My favourite hobby is studying, dancing, singing, and watching movies or series. These are my daily routines. Some days, I go for a walk with my friends and playing more games but I didn't get any points from the games. Spending many times with Nature is cool my mind.
2021년 2월 7일 오전 8:18
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My favourite hobbies are studying, dancing, singing, and watching movies or series. These make up my daily routine. Some days, I go for a walk with my friends and play some games but I didn't benefit from the games. I like to spend a lot of time out in nature; it's cool, I think. ["favourite" is UK English. "favorite" is US English.]
2021년 2월 7일
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My favourite hobby is studying, dancing, singing, and watching movies or series. These are my daily routines. Some days, I go for a walk with my friends and playing more games but I didn't get any points from the games. Spending many times with Nature is cool my mind.
Perhaps you mean "spending a lot of time out in nature cools my mind"
2021년 2월 7일
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