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The Tim じぁん!!!
It's a chilly day today. I've been wearing my hoodie all day, even indoors. Dad spent some time tinkering with our old Christmas tree. It's quite old, maybe from when I was three or four. The trunk was tilted, and its tripod was snapped. Mom had left it leaning against the wall for years. After lunch, Dad finally decided to fix it. He used a bracket from God knows where to stabilize the trunk and fixed the electrical wiring to make the lights twinkle again. It's starting to feel a lot like Christmas now.
2024년 12월 13일 오후 12:20
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It's a chilly day today. I've been wearing my hoodie all day, even indoors. Dad
spent some time tinkering with our old Christmas tree. It's quite old, maybe
from when I was three or four. The trunk was tilted, and its tripod had snapped.
Mom had left it leaning against the wall for years. After lunch, Dad finally
decided to fix it. He used a bracket from God knows where to stabilize the trunk
and fixed the electrical wiring to make the lights twinkle again. It's starting
to feel a lot like Christmas now.
This is great! Only one very tiny, insignificant change… well done!
2024년 12월 13일
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