千山皓月
Are you comfortable working with students from diverse backgrounds? Why ? because I care about making a connection with people and about doing the right thing for my students.
2025년 3월 19일 오전 9:04
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Are you comfortable working with students from diverse backgrounds? Why ? Yes, because I care about making connections with people and doing the right thing for my students.
I included “Yes,” to make the answer more natural. “Making connections” sounds more natural when referring to diverse backgrounds. I removed the extra “about”, because “About doing the right thing” is enough; “about making a connection” and “about doing” made the sentence a bit clunky.
2025년 3월 19일 오후 9:50
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