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Today, I had to work part time job from 10 a.m. to 6 a.m. I was going to leave at 9:30 a.m. but I got up 9:25 a.m. I was very surprised! I ran hard and managed to make it in time. At night, I met my parents. It was very happy.
2025년 5월 10일 오전 4:41
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“Today, I had to work a part-time job from 10 a.m. to 6 p.m. I was going to leave at 9:30 a.m., but I got up at 9:25 a.m. I was very surprised! I ran as fast as I could and managed to make it on time. In the evening, I met my parents. I was really happy.”
Use “a” before “part-time job” and double-check time expressions (you probably meant 6 p.m., not 6 a.m.). Also, we say “make it on time” (not “in time” in this context) and “I was happy”, not “It was happy,” when talking about your own feelings.
2025년 5월 10일 오전 8:54
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