Jesús M. Sebastián
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As for learning goals, Improving my fluency by keeping on practicing with native speakers as well as reading. The good part is that I do this not only as a duty but enjoying myself too. Regarding my professional career, I'd love to get one of the jobs I've applied for to teach English to adults for professional purposes.
2022년 1월 7일 오후 8:39
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As for learning goals, improving my fluency by keeping on practicing with native speakers as well as reading. The good part is that I do this not only as a duty but also for enjoyment. Regarding my professional career, I'd love to get one of the jobs I've applied for to teach English to adults for professional purposes.
“But also for enjoyment,” “but to enjoy myself, too,” — either could work You don’t have an error in the last sentence, but it would be better to say, “Professionally, I’d love to get one of the jobs I’ve applied for, teaching English to adults.” If by “for professional purposes” you mean that it’s for their professions, you could say “teaching English to adults that need it for work” (since you’ve already said professional in the sentence). If you mean that it’s for your profession, having already said it at the beginning of the sentence is sufficient.
2022년 1월 7일
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