A happy new year. Hello 2022! Actually, I will have a ceremony which is celebrated to be an adult. In Japan, to be 20 years old, collecting the birth place every 成人の日. I will meet friends when I was

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A happy new year. Hello 2022! Actually, I will have a ceremony which is celebrated to be an adult. In Japan, to be 20 years old, collecting the birth place every 成人の日. I will meet friends when I was in the junior high school and elementary school. To tell the truth, I don’t have good memories in the junior high school student. However, I believe that a few friends come to the ceremony tomorrow. Anyway, how was your winter vacation? For me, it was good, because I went skiing during this vacation. It was really fun. In this season, Japan doesn’t snow everywhere but I had a plan to go skiing one day ago. It snowed. I felt that it was miracle and delightful for me. It is about starting the school. I want to take more breaks. Instead of the spring vacation is coming soon. A little time, I do my best at the school. On the other hand, I have not finished my a lot of homework yet. I must finish homework by tomorrow. I am flustered. I remain a lot of them. I am reflecting back on things. In 2022, I need to change my life. It is necessary for me to do behavior with a margin. For example, my homework, assignments and working… and so on. Someday, if I will find that it is really good cycling to continue to do whole I am a university student.

2022년 1월 9일 오후 2:24

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A happy new year. Hello 2022! I will be having a ceremony to celebrate becoming an adult. *In Japan, to be 20 years old, collecting the birth place every 成人の日.* I will meet with my friends from junior high school and elementary school. To tell the truth, I don’t have good memories as a junior high school student. However, I believe that a few friends will come to the ceremony tomorrow. Anyway, how was your winter vacation? Mine was good, because I went skiing during this vacation. It was really fun. In this season, Japan doesn’t snow everywhere but I had a plan to go skiing one day ago regardless. It snowed. I felt that it was miracle and it was delightful for me. School is starting again soon. I want to take more breaks. At least the spring vacation is coming soon. Only a little time and I will do my best at school. On the other hand, I have not finished my a lot of my homework. I must finish my homework by tomorrow. I am flustered, a lot of it is remaining. I am reflecting back on things. In 2022, I need to change my life. It is necessary for me to be more disciplined. For example, my homework, assignments, work… and so on. *Someday, if I will find that it is really good cycling to continue to do whole I am a university student.*

Sentence construction is poor. You need to make paragraph breaks when you are starting a new thought. You need to widen your vocabulary. The starred sentences are the ones l couldn't correct because l couldn't catch your train. I didn't understand what you wanted to say so l didn't want to destroy the meaning you had intended. But l am willing to help. Book a lesson with me and let us work on this.

2022년 1월 10일

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