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Well, they say true friend is hard to find and its better to have one true friend than to have hundreds of relatives. In my own opinion, i would somehow agree. I have met a lot of different people and became friends at some point however, for me its not about the number. I can able to tell that a true friend will remain with you in good times and in bad times. They will join you in your happiness, celebrations and success however they will also be there in times of hardships, failures and sorrow. The concern is there but its more than that. I believe, that true friends will show there love, care and empathy. That is how i could define them as someone that could be treasured. They can be as good as relatives as well in some case.
2021년 7월 11일 오전 8:16
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Well, they say that true friends are hard to find and its better to have one true friend than to have hundreds of random acquaintances. In my opinion, I think that it's almost true. I have met a lot of different people and became friends at some point, however, for me it's not about the number. I am able to tell that true friends will remain with you in good and bad times. They will join you in your happiness, celebrations and success but also in your times of hardships, failures and sorrow. I believe that true friends will show their love, care and empathy. That is how I would define them, as treasured people. They can be as good as relatives as well in some cases.
2021년 7월 11일
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Well, they say a true friend is hard to find and it’s better to have one true friend than to have hundreds of relatives. In my own opinion, I would somehow agree. I have met a lot of different people and became friends at some point.
However, for me, it’s not about the number. I am able to tell that a true friend will remain with you in good times and in bad times. They will join you in your happiness, celebrations and success. However, they will also be there in times of
hardships, failures and sorrow. The concern is there but it’s more than that. I believe, that true friends will show their love, care and empathy. That is how I could define them as someone that could be treasured. They can be as good as
relatives as well in some cases.
2021년 7월 11일
Well, they say a true friend is hard to find. It's better to have one true friend than to have hundreds of relatives. In my own opinion, I would somehow agree. I have met a lot of different people and became friends at some point however, for me it's not about the number. I can tell that a true friend will remain with you in good times and in bad times. They will join you in your happiness, celebrations, and success. However, they will also be there in times of hardships, failures, and sorrow. The concern is there, but it's more than that. I believe those true friends will show their love, care, and empathy. That is how I could define them as someone that could be treasured. They can be as good as relatives as well in some cases.
Hi Connie, how are you doing? I think you did an excellent job in this piece of writing. Well done. Just a reminder:the pronoun "I" should always be capitalised, even when it is not the first word of a sentence. Keep up the good work!
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