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Agata
It was in June . I went to a picturesque village in the mountains. I spent there three days. I was there with my nephew who is an IT engineer, so his work is sedentary and rather stressful and he needed some exercise. We climbed every day one peak, it was really exhausting . Those mountains are not high but very steep. We had to cover a large height difference within a short distance. However we had a lot of fun especially during breaks and also captivating views. Not to mention the appetite. Even quite plain food tasted like a fancy treat.
2022년 7월 26일 오후 4:56
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I went to a picturesque village in the mountains in June. I spent three days there. I was there with my nephew who is an IT engineer. His work is sedentary and rather stressful and he needed some exercise. We climbed one peak every day and it was really exhausting. Those mountains are not high but we had to climb a steep incline. Despite that, we had a lot of fun, especially during breaks, and we enjoyed captivating views. It gave us a huge appetite. Even very plain food tasted like a fancy treat.
Well done, Agata!
2022년 7월 26일
It was in June . I went to a picturesque village in the mountains. I spent
three days there. I was there with my nephew who is an IT engineer, so his work is
sedentary and rather stressful and he needed some exercise. We climbed one peak every day, it was really exhausting . Those mountains are not high but are very
steep. We had to cover a large height difference within a short distance.
However we had a lot of fun especially during breaks and also there were captivating views.
Not to mention the appetite. Even quite plain food tasted like a fancy treat.
Great job! Just work on sentence structure a little :)
2022년 7월 26일
In June I went to a picturesque village in the mountains. I spent three days there. I was there with my nephew, who is an IT engineer, so his work is sedentary and rather stressful and he needed some exercise. We climbed a peak every day, it was really exhausting. Those mountains are not high, but very steep. We had to cover a large height difference within a short distance. However we had a lot of fun especially during breaks and also captivating views. Not to mention the appetite. Even quite plain food tasted like a fancy treat.
Hi Agata. Not bad. It is just a question of correct word order. Keep practicing! Simon.
2022년 7월 26일
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