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For elder people they often eat more light. In the morning and night,they usually eat porridge. More vegetables of course.
On the contrary,the young people like me,we prefer to eat what we like. Meat 🍖,spicy,junk food. I agree with more healthy life. But it’s hard for me to do it.
2021년 6월 13일 오전 12:02
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Very nice; everything was understandable. I mostly combined sentences to avoid fragments and to make the text flow more logically. The phrases in parentheses are OK, but are either superfluous or simply less native.
Keep up the good work!
Elderly people they often eat lighter. In the morning and evening (or "in the morning and at night"), they usually eat porridge, and more vegetables (of course).
On the other hand, young people like me prefer to eat what we like, (such as) meat 🍖, spicy food, and junk food. I'd like to live a more healthy life (or "a healthier life"), but it’s hard (for me to do it).
2021년 6월 13일
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For older people, they often eat lighter meals. In the morning and night, they usually eat porridge with more vegetables, of course.
On the contrary, for young people like me, we prefer to eat what we like. Meat 🍖,spicy and junk food. I agree it is important to lead a healthy life. But it’s hard for me to do it.
Good things are hard to do, aren't they?
2021년 6월 13일
For the elderly they often eat something light/ eat food with a light taste(吃清淡口味的菜)/ eat less(吃得少). In the morning and at night, they
usually eat porridge(alternative: They usually eat porridge for breakfast and dinner). They also eat more vegetables. On the contrary, the young
people/generation, like me, prefers to eat what we like, such as meat 🍖, spicy food, or junk food. I agree
with a healthy life, but it’s hard for me to do it.
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2021년 6월 13일
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