Anton
My answer is definitely no. It is the same like trying to lose extra weight via going to the gim once per year. Of course it is better than nothing, but It should be acknowledged that one day couldn't change anything. From the other hand, one day is a done action...the first step, if you wish. I don't really think that there is any one challenge solved without the first step. As a conclusion, I want to repeat myself, only one car-free day is not a solution,but the direction to the right side, what probably even much important.
2021년 6월 13일 오후 6:07
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*It is okay to use "via" but it is an informal word so I do no advice you to use it when writing formal content.
* Introductory/transition words are really nice to use because they provide the tone of the context and they are also used to acknowledge background information.
(Although,However,etc)
2021년 6월 13일
My answer is definitely no. It is the same as trying to lose weight by going to the gym once per year. Of course it is better than nothing, but tt should be acknowledged that one day couldn't change anything. On the other hand, one day is a done action...the first step, if you wish. I don't really think that there is any one challenge solved without the first step. As a conclusion, I want to repeat myself, only one car-free day is not a solution,but in the right direction, which is probably even much important.
Privet Anton, well done. "Like" suggests a similarity, but not the same. It would be more common to say "once A year". "Per" sounds formal/technical. These corrections are a question of knowing the common expressions, and that can be helped with reading. Keep practicing! Simon.
2021년 6월 13일
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