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Suzuka Taira
I think credit cards are very useful tool. It is because I can buy products when I need them, even if I don't have the money then. I often use my credit cards. However, I think it's a disadvantage to spend too much money. 💵😮💨 I think we need to know the dangers before we have a credit card.
2021년 6월 20일 오전 8:22
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I think credit cards are very useful tool because I can buy products when
I need them, even if I don't have the money at the time. I often use my credit cards.
However, it's a disadvantage to spend too much money. 💵😮💨 I think we
need to know the dangers before we have a credit card.
The paragraph is correct but only some structural changes needed on the writing style.
2021년 6월 20일
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