Agustín
Barcelona, in its tourist version, is kind of nightmare for the people who live in that city. Overcrowded with tourists visiting the main points of interest; air contamination from these gigantic cruise ships moored in the port; parts of the city transformed in a kind of modernist architecture theme park for the entertainment of large tourist groups; a lot of tourist apartments all over the place, and so on and so forth. Naturally, for shoppers, restaurant owners, hoteliers, and the rest of tourist businesses, all this must be all right! Or even more, I guess they think it’s the most similar to a golden paradise on earth. However, I would say it’s rather a fool’s paradise. Anyway, putting aside tourism as a somehow annoying issue, if you are a city type of person and you love enjoying its atmosphere, architecture, history, gastronomy, and what have you, Barcelona is an interesting place to visit and enjoy, that’s for sure.
2023년 12월 18일 오후 10:44
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Barcelona, in its tourist version, is kind of a nightmare for the people who live there. Overcrowded with tourists visiting the main points of interest; air contamination from the gigantic cruise ships moored in the port; parts of the city transformed in a kind of modernist architecture theme park for the entertainment of large tourist groups; a lot of tourist apartments all over the place, and so on and so forth. (I'm not sure the previous, starting at OVERCROWDED is actually a sentence, but it works). Naturally, for shoppers, restaurant owners, hoteliers, and the rest of the tourist businesses, all this must be all right! Or even more, I guess they think it’s a golden paradise on earth. However, I would say it’s rather a fool’s paradise. Anyway, putting aside tourism as a somehow annoying issue, if you are a city type of person and you love enjoying its atmosphere, architecture, history, gastronomy, and what have you, Barcelona is an interesting place to visit and enjoy, that’s for sure.
Very nice job! I made only minor corrections or stylistic changes. I loved Barcelona the time I visited, but I can imagine getting tired of all the tourists if I lived there.
2023년 12월 19일
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