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My favorite movie is Harry Potter.
I have been watching this movie since a few days ago. It's fascinating. Besides, it's
an English movie. So, it's very convenient for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions, their accents and I can watch the movie too.
2024년 8월 10일 오후 4:44
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My favorite movie is Harry Potter.
I have been watching this movie since a few days ago. It's fascinating. Also, it's
an English movie. So, it's a very convenient way for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions and their accents, and I can watch the movie too.
"Besides" indicates that you are setting aside one idea to talk about something else. It works a bit like "anyway.". "Also" works better here. "It's very convenient for me to improve my English skills" implies that improving your English skills is convenient. Great job with this overall!
2024년 8월 11일
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My favorite movie is Harry Potter. I have been watching this movie since a few
days ago. It's fascinating. Besides, it's an English movie. So, it's very
convenient for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions,
their accents and I can watch the movie too.
2024년 8월 10일
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