吴洲洋
# Should businesses do anything they can to make a profit? As everyone knows that money is important. Due to make a profit, some businessmen maybe do anything even incluce many lilegal things. Obviously, their habits are wrong and they finally must be punished by law. I want to introduce two things that really happened in my life. The content of first thing is about a man who made a small shop besides the road decelted me result in losing my money. When I was a children, one day I came back my home as smailer as usual. Suddenly, I would like to eat a ice-cream. So I found my mother and required her that give me a little money to buy ice-cream. My mother agreed my requirements. I meet the bad businessman when I went to the suppermarket. He told me that if I played the game with him and I was victory, he will give my money; but if I loss, I need give him money. Unfortunatelly, I loss my game and sadly came back home. My mother asked me why didn't you have a ice-cream. I told her what happend in recently. I never forget the bad businessman. The second story happened during I was in university. Because I was very poor in that time, I alway considered a question how can I make a lot of money and the job was easy. Now I think it is impossible to the answer of the question exit in the world. Sometimes, some unfortunate things happend in our life. I found the job that people can earn money by it and the requirements of this position were extramely easy. Yes, I also loss my money. The content of the job is about help the online shop to improve their arrayments by buying the goods from their shop. The boss of the online shop promised me that he will pay back money when I finished my task. Finally, I loss 200 money. Making a profit is the best things by right way. We should not hurt other people to get our global.
2022년 11월 6일 오후 2:41
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# Should businesses do anything they can to make a profit? As everyone knows, money is important. To make a profit, some businessmen may do anything, even many lilegal things. Obviously, their practices are wrong and they must be punished by law. I want to talk about two things that really happened in my life. The first is about a man who had a small shop beside the road. He deceived me, resulting in me losing my money. When I was a child one day I came back my home as usual. Suddenly, I wanted to eat an ice-cream. So I found my mother and asked her to give me a little money to buy ice-cream. My mother agreed my request. I met the bad businessman when I went to the suppermarket. He told me that if I played the game with him and won, he would give my money; but if I lost I would have to give him money. Unfortunatelly, I lost my game and sadly came back home. My mother asked me why didn't you have a ice-cream. I told her what had happened. I will never forget the bad businessman.
No bad overall. SMAILER? i don't understand. You don't REQUIRE your mother to do things. This would be like giving an order.. This go kind of long - I just corrected the first half.
2022년 11월 7일
# Should businesses do anything they can to make a profit? As everyone knows that money is essential. Due to making a profit, some businessmen maybe do anything even include many illegal things. Their habits are wrong and they finally must be punished by law. I want to introduce two things that happened in my life. The content of the first thing is about a man who made a small shop beside the road and defeated me resulting in losing my money. When I was a child, one day I came back home as smaller as usual. Suddenly, I would like to eat ice cream. So I found my mother and required her that give me a little money to buy ice cream. My mother agreed to my requirements. I meet a bad businessman when I went to the supermarket. He told me that if I played the game with him and I was victorious, he would give me money; but if I lost, I need to give him money. Unfortunately, I lost my game and sadly came back home. My mother asked me why I didn't have ice cream. I told her what happened recently. I never forget the bad businessman. The second story happened while I was in university. Because I was very poor at that time, I always considered the question of how can I make a lot of money and whether the job was easy. Now I think it is impossible to answer of the question exit from the world. Sometimes, some unfortunate things happen in our life. I found a job where people can earn money by it and the requirements of this position were extremely easy. Yes, I also lost my money. The content of the job is about helping the online shop to improve their arrangements by buying the goods from their shop. The boss of the online shop promised me that he will pay back the money when I finished my task. Finally, I lost 200 money. Making a profit is the best thing in the right way. We should not hurt other people to get our goal.
2022년 11월 6일
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