Akram Alwajih
in my opinion there is many advantages and disadvantages for online learning .
let me begin with advantages
online learning enable us to learn anything quickly and you can find alots of sources in specific topic rather than go to library and look for what you need in hard way and definitely lose your time
second advantages enable us to know people from another culture and help you to find quary .
in the other hand the disadvantages of online learning is
First massive resources confuse you becouse some of resources opposes one another .
second it make us lazy without aspirations to learn more
2022년 9월 6일 오후 6:24
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In my opinion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of online learning .
Let me begin with the advantages. Online learning enables us to learn quickly. We can find lots of sources for a specific topic, rather than needing to go to a library and look for what you need, which can be very time consuming.
Secondly, online learning enables us to get to know people from different cultures.
On the other hand, one the disadvantages of online learning is the massive amount of resources available, which might be confusing as some of the resources opposes one another.
Secondly, it might make us lazy, without aspirations to learn more.
This was a good effort Akram, there were just some grammatical errors.
I’ve corrected these and reorganised the sentences in a way that sounds more natural.
Some of your sentences were very long, with lots of ‘and, and, and…’ It’s normally best to shorten these and start a new sentence.
If you have any questions about this please let me know.
2022년 9월 7일
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