Александр Синкевичус
Hello. I want to introduce my family! I have a wife, her daughter is 6 and her son is 1. We live happily and amicably. we love to walk and play together.
2022년 9월 7일 오후 6:49
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Hello. I want to introduce my family to you! I have a wife and two children — a daughter aged 6 and a son aged 1. We live happily and love going for walks and playing together.
Nice work. I’m assuming that your wife’s children are also your children, right? If so, then the correction I have given above sounds more natural. If the children are not yours, then it would be okay to say “she [your wife] has two children — a daughter aged 6 and a son aged 1.” Hope that makes sense!
2022년 9월 7일
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Hello. I would like to introduce my family! I have a wife, our daughter is 6 and our son is 1. We live happily and amicably. we love to walk and play together. Please book a trial lesson with me so I can help you learn more English.
2022년 9월 7일
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Hello. I want to introduce my family! I have a wife, and her daughter is 6 and her son is 1. We live happily and amicably. We love to walk and play together.
Pretty good!
2022년 9월 7일
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